I didn’t know Derek before our road trip. He was just a fellow traveler, splitting the cost of gas with another hitchhiker, Jenny, and me. When we stopped for the night, I accidentally overheard his conversation with Jenny. That’s when I realized Derek wasn’t just a random stranger—he knew Jenny before the trip and had planned our meeting! But why? A shiver of unease ran through me…
I’m a young journalist with a passion for uncovering the truth. I was excited but nervous about my latest assignment: investigating a mysterious house where a young girl had died under unclear circumstances.
My budget was tight, so I put up an ad in a local bar, hoping to find someone to split the cost of gas. Unfortunately, no one responded.
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The next morning, I found myself at a quaint café in the suburbs, sipping a strong cup of coffee and going over my notes. The smell of freshly baked bread filled the air, making it a bit easier to push aside my worries.
I’d been waiting for a potential travel companion who called early that morning. When I answered and realized it was a man, I immediately told him he would probably be rejected. But he insisted on meeting and asked for just five minutes of my time.
Just as I took a bite of my toast, a young man approached my table.
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“Hi, are you Emily?” he asked.
I looked up, slightly startled. “Yes, that’s me.”
He gave a small smile. “I’m Derek. I called you earlier this morning about the ad. I’m heading in the same direction and thought we could travel together.”
I studied him for a moment. Derek was tall, with a rugged look that suggested he had seen more than a few adventures. His dark eyes held a hint of mystery, and his posture was relaxed but assured.
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There was something about him that made me uneasy, but I couldn’t afford to be picky.
“Uh, sure,” I replied, trying to sound more confident than I felt. “I could use the company.”
We sat and talked for a bit. Derek was reserved, sharing little about himself. His answers to my questions were short and vague.
Despite my unease, I couldn’t deny that having a travel companion was practical. The trip was long, and having someone to share the driving and expenses was a relief.
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“Why are you heading that way?” I asked, hoping to learn more about him.
He paused, looking out the window before answering. “Just need to get away for a while. Clear my head.”
I nodded and didn’t press further. There was something about his tone that suggested he wasn’t telling the whole story, but I decided to let it go.
We did some shopping together and then hit the road.
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I couldn’t shake the feeling that I was making a mistake, but I pushed it aside. I had a job to do, and Derek was my best option for getting there.
Little did I know that this decision would lead me down a path of unexpected twists and revelations, starting with a curious incident at our first stop.
***
As we drove down the long, winding road, I tried to make small talk with Derek. The silence between us felt heavy, and I hoped to ease the tension.
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“So, Derek, where are you from?” I asked, keeping my eyes on the road.
He glanced at me, then looked out the window.
“A little bit of everywhere, I guess. I’ve moved around a lot.”
I nodded, trying to get him to open up more.
“What made you decide to move so much?”
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Derek shrugged, his expression unreadable.
“Just never found a place to settle down, I suppose.”
I sensed he didn’t want to delve into his past, but my curiosity got the better of me.
“What do you do for a living?”
He hesitated before answering, “Odd jobs here and there. Nothing permanent.”
I felt a pang of unease. His vagueness was unsettling.
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“Any family or friends you keep in touch with?”
Derek’s jaw tightened. “Not really. It’s just me.”
The more he spoke, the more I regretted taking him with me. The air in the car grew tense, and I focused on the road ahead, my mind racing with doubts.
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After some time, we pulled into a gas station. “I need to stretch my legs,” I said, trying to shake off the unease.
Derek nodded and stayed in the car while I went inside to use the restroom.
When I returned, something felt off. My bag was slightly open, and my papers were not as I had left them. It looked like someone had been rifling through my notes.
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I glanced at Derek, who was casually leaning back in his seat, seemingly unaware of my distress. My heart raced with suspicion, but I kept quiet.
As I was about to get back into the car, I noticed a girl standing by the convenience store entrance. She looked lost and somewhat anxious.
“Hi there,” I called out. “Are you okay?”
She turned to me.
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“Oh, hi! I’m Jenny. My ride left me here, and I had no way to get to my next stop. Could you possibly give me a lift?”
Jenny seemed a bit ditzy, but harmless. I weighed my options and decided it might be safer to have another person with us.
“Sure, Jenny. We’re heading that way. Hop in.” I showed her the back seat.
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Jenny’s face lit up. “Thank you so much! You have no idea how grateful I am.”
As we drove off, Jenny sat in the back seat, chattering away. She talked about her plans, her favorite music, and her cat named Muffin. Her bubbly nature provided a stark contrast to Derek’s brooding silence.
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“So, where are you guys headed?” Jenny asked, leaning forward.
“I’m writing an article about a mysterious house where a young girl died,” I explained. “It’s a bit of a creepy story.”
Jenny’s eyes widened. “Wow, that sounds intense! I’ve always been fascinated by mysteries. What about you, Derek? What brings you on this trip?”
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Derek turned slightly, his expression still guarded. “Just needed a ride. Emily was kind enough to let me join.”
Jenny seemed satisfied with the answer, but I could see her stealing curious glances at Derek. Her presence made me feel a bit more at ease, but the nagging feeling that something was off with Derek never left my mind.
As the miles stretched on, I couldn’t shake the sense that this trip was about to get a lot more complicated.
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***
We arrived at the house late in the evening. It loomed in front of us, a dark silhouette against the dimming sky.
Derek suggested we stay the night since the nearest town was 30 miles away. I felt a chill run down my spine at the thought. Though I was scared, Jenny assured me it would be fine, and we could lock our bedroom doors. I reluctantly agreed.
While Derek and Jenny prepared a meal from our shopping list and vegetables they found in the garden, I wandered around the house, taking in the eerie atmosphere.
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The house was old, with creaky floorboards and dusty corners. I pulled out my dictaphone and began recording my observations.
July 11 – 21:46
[Click, creaking floorboards]
“This house belonged to a man who lived here with his wife.”
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[Footsteps]
“He killed her for infidelity and was convicted of premeditated murder.”
[Sneeze]
“Excuse me, there’s so much dust here. There’s a photo on the shelf. Let me see…”
[Rustling of paper]
“Oh my god… it’s Derek. My travel companion is the same guy accused of murder!”
[Click]
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I stood frozen, staring at the old photograph in my hand. It was unmistakably Derek, younger but him, with a woman who must have been his wife.
My heart pounded in my chest as I pieced together the implications.
Downstairs, I heard Derek and Jenny chatting. Their voices were low and casual, but now every word seemed charged with hidden meanings.
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I took a deep breath and decided to sneak down quietly, hoping to learn more without alerting them. The old floorboards groaned under my weight, but I moved as silently as I could, hugging the shadows.
The closer I got, the more their conversation came into focus. Jenny’s giggle sounded forced, and Derek’s tone was unsettlingly calm. I pressed myself against the wall outside the kitchen, straining to catch their words.
“…she’s suspicious,” Jenny was saying.
“Doesn’t matter,” Derek replied smoothly. “We stick to the plan.”
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What plan? What were they up to?
I edged closer, my breath shallow.
“You think she bought it?” Jenny asked.
“She will,” Derek said confidently. “She has no choice.”
I felt a cold sweat break out on my forehead. I had to know what they were planning, but I had to be careful. One wrong move, and they would know I was listening.
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Suddenly, Jenny’s voice changed, becoming more serious. “And if she finds out the truth?”
Derek’s answer was chillingly calm. “We’ll deal with it.”
A floorboard creaked loudly under my foot. The conversation stopped abruptly, and I heard chairs scraping against the floor as they stood up.
“Emily?” Derek called out, his voice dangerously close.
I had to act fast. I quickly slipped into a dark corner, hoping they wouldn’t see me. My heart pounded in my ears as I tried to stay perfectly still.
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“Did you hear that?” Jenny whispered.
“Probably just the house settling,” Derek said, though his tone suggested he wasn’t convinced.
I waited, my breath held, until I heard their footsteps retreating into the kitchen. Only then did I let out a sigh of relief, though my mind was still racing.
What had I gotten myself into? And what were they planning to do with me?
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***
Thinking they hadn’t noticed me, I cautiously descended the stairs, each step echoing in the old house.
Suddenly, a hand clamped down on my shoulder. I spun around, my eyes wide with fear as I faced Derek. Jenny stood behind him, looking equally startled.
“Why were you sneaking around?” Derek’s eyes narrowed, his grip tightening on my shoulder.
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“I wasn’t sneaking,” I stammered, trying to sound brave. “I heard noises and got curious.”
“Curious, huh?” Derek’s voice was cold. “Well, now that you’re here, why don’t you join us?”
He guided me into the kitchen, not giving me a chance to resist. Jenny stood awkwardly there, her eyes darting between us. The dinner was waiting at the table.
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I took a deep breath, gathering my courage. “What’s going on? Why are you really here?”
Derek exchanged a glance with Jenny before speaking. “We need to talk, Emily. You weren’t supposed to find out like this, but you’ve left us no choice.”
My heart pounded as I waited for an explanation, the tension in the room thick and suffocating.
Derek began, “I followed you because I couldn’t risk you writing another defamatory article about me. My life has been ruined by lies, and I need you to hear the truth.”
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Jenny stepped forward.
“I was at the gas station to make sure you wouldn’t be afraid to travel with us. We needed you to stay here overnight so we could explain everything.”
I shook my head, disbelief and anger surging through me.
“You manipulated me, invaded my privacy. How can I trust anything you say?”
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Derek’s expression softened. “Please, just listen. I’m not the monster they made me out to be.”
The room fell silent as I processed their words. My mind raced with questions, doubts, and fears.
Could I trust them? Did I have a choice?
“Fine,” I said finally, my voice trembling. “Explain everything. But this better be good.”
We sat down at the table, and Derek took a deep breath, ready to reveal the secrets that had brought us to this point.
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***
Over dinner, once we had all calmed down, Derek recounted the story of his wife. He explained what really happened.
“My wife, Laura, died in a tragic accident,” Derek began.
“We argued, and I stormed out of the house, leaving her behind. Our neighbor saw me leave, she can confirm that. When I returned, I found her at the bottom of the stairs. The authorities ruled it an accident, saying she must have slipped and fallen. But her sister, Clara, never liked me and seized the opportunity to accuse me of murder. She convinced the media to publish lies, portraying it as a deliberate act.”
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Derek paused, his voice heavy with emotion. “I still blame myself for what happened, for leaving her alone. But I can’t bear another round of lies and accusations of intentional murder. I need the truth to be known.”
I listened intently, the pieces of the puzzle starting to fit together.
Derek continued, “The trial cleared my name, but the damage was done. Clara’s influence made sure everyone believed I was guilty. The articles painted me as a monster.”
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Jenny nodded, her eyes filled with empathy.
“We knew you were writing about the house where it happened. We wanted to make sure you heard the truth, not just Clara’s version.”
I felt a bit of guilt and understanding. “I’m sorry, Derek. I judged you based on what I read. I should have looked deeper.”
Derek gave a small, appreciative smile. “Thank you for listening, Emily. That’s all I wanted. Let’s have dinner, I’m so hungry!”
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During the meal, we discussed everything that happened. Derek shared more about his life since the incident, the constant shadow of suspicion hanging over him. Jenny added details about Clara’s vendetta and how it had affected them both.
I decided to help Derek restore his reputation.
“I’ll write the true story,” I promised. “People need to know what really happened.”
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The atmosphere lightened. We were no longer just strangers thrown together by circumstance; we were allies with a common goal.
Jenny, Derek, and I agreed to continue traveling together for a while longer. We wanted to ensure Derek’s story was told accurately, and in the process, we found ourselves enjoying each other’s company as newfound friends.
The road ahead seemed less daunting, knowing we had each other for support.
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My Son Proposed to a Girl He’d Only Known for 3 Weeks—During the Ceremony, the Police Walked In
I never imagined my son’s wedding day would end with flashing lights and a runaway bride. When those men flashed their badges and called Lisa’s name, her face changed so fast it was like watching a mask slip.
When my son, Daniel, told me he was getting engaged after just three weeks of dating a girl named Lisa, my heart sank. We were having our regular Sunday dinner, Arnold grilling steaks outside while I finished the salad. Daniel had been unusually quiet all evening, checking his phone and smiling to himself.
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“Mom, Arnold, I have some news,” he announced, putting his water glass down with deliberate care.
Arnold came in from the patio, spatula still in hand. “Everything okay, buddy?”
“Better than okay.” Daniel’s face broke into a wide grin. “I’m getting married.”
I dropped the serving spoon. “You’re what?”
“Her name is Lisa. She’s amazing, Mom. She’s smart and funny and beautiful, and we just… connect, you know?”
Arnold sat down slowly. “How long have you been seeing this girl?”
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“Three weeks,” Daniel said proudly, as if this was an accomplishment.
“Three weeks?” I echoed, my voice rising. “Daniel, that’s not enough time to decide what college courses to take, let alone choose a life partner!”
“I knew right away,” he insisted. “When you know, you know.”
“No, honey, you don’t,” I said, trying to keep my voice calm. “You think you know, but people show their best selves at the beginning. It takes time to truly know someone.”
“Lisa isn’t like that. She’s genuine. She gets me.”
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Arnold, always the diplomat, tried a different approach. “What does she do? Where did you meet her?”
“At the campus coffee shop. She’s studying business. Mom, she’s so driven. She’s got these amazing plans for the future.”
“Daniel,” I said carefully, “you’re only 19. You have your whole life ahead of you. What’s the rush?”
His face hardened in that stubborn way I knew too well. “There’s no rush. It just feels right. I thought you’d be happy for me.”
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“We want you to be happy,” Arnold said. “But we also want you to make good decisions. Marriage is serious.”
“I am serious,” Daniel snapped. “Lisa is perfect for me. She makes me feel like no one else ever has.”
Two days later, we met Lisa. I had to admit, she was stunning. Tall and poised with intelligent eyes and a dazzling smile. She charmed Arnold with questions about his job and complimented my home with the precision of an interior decorator.
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“Your son is incredible, Mrs. Harrison,” she said, her voice musical. “I’ve never met anyone like him.”
There was something rehearsed about her, though. Like she knew exactly what to say and when to say it. And despite claiming to be 19, there was a worldliness to her that seemed beyond her years.
“Where did you grow up, Lisa?” I asked casually over dinner.
“Oh, all over,” she replied smoothly. “My dad’s job meant we moved a lot. It taught me to adapt quickly.”
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Every answer was like that. Perfect but vague, deflecting further questions while sounding completely reasonable.
Later that week, Daniel told us he’d introduced Lisa to Morgan, his biological father.
“Dad thinks she’s amazing,” he declared triumphantly. “He said we have his full blessing.”
I called Morgan that night after Daniel left.
“Did you really give your blessing?” I demanded.
Morgan sighed. “What was I supposed to say, Christie? The kid’s got stars in his eyes. Besides, he’s an adult now.”
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“An adult who’s making a huge mistake!”
“Maybe,” Morgan conceded. “But sometimes people need to make their own mistakes.”
I tried reasoning with Daniel one more time. I told him he was too young, that he should finish college first, and that they could have a long engagement. But my impulsive, headstrong son wouldn’t budge.
“I love her, Mom,” he said simply. “I’m going to marry her.”
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As the days passed, I realized I had no choice but to support Daniel’s decision. When he told me they’d set a date, just six weeks away, I plastered on a smile and nodded.
“Lisa’s parents want to meet you,” Daniel said one evening, practically bouncing with excitement. “They’re in town this weekend.”
The meeting was at a restaurant downtown. Lisa’s parents, James and Elaine, seemed pleasant enough. Elaine had Lisa’s same striking features, and James was all firm handshakes and hearty laughs.
“We were surprised too,” James confided over appetizers. “But when you see them together, you understand.”
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“Lisa has always known her own mind,” Elaine added. “When she’s certain, she’s certain.”
When the conversation turned to wedding plans, I braced myself for discussions of venues and caterers. Instead, Lisa’s mother surprised me.
“We don’t believe in extravagant ceremonies,” she explained. “In our family, we value the marriage more than the wedding day.”
“Just something small and meaningful,” James agreed. “No sense starting a life together buried in debt.”
Daniel nodded enthusiastically. “That’s what I’ve been telling Mom. Lisa and I want something simple.”
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Something still felt off, but they seemed so reasonable that I couldn’t pinpoint what was bothering me. By the time we left the restaurant, the wedding was set for three weeks later in a small rented hall downtown.
That night, I sat on the edge of our bed while Arnold got ready for sleep.
“Are we doing the right thing?” I asked, staring at the carpet. “Supporting this… rushed marriage?”
Arnold paused. “What choice do we have, Christie? He’s an adult.”
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“But something doesn’t feel right,” I insisted. “Everything’s happening so fast. And Lisa… she’s lovely, but sometimes it feels like she’s performing rather than just being herself.”
Arnold sat beside me, his weight sinking the mattress. “You’re overthinking this. Daniel seems happy. Happier than I’ve seen him in ages.”
“But what nineteen-year-old knows what they want? What marriage means?”
“We were young when we got married.”
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“That was different. I’d already been married and divorced. I had Daniel. And we dated for two years, not three weeks!”
Arnold slipped an arm around my shoulders. “Lisa seems like a nice girl, Christie. And if Daniel is happy, shouldn’t we be happy for him?”
“I’m trying,” I sighed. “I just can’t shake this feeling.”
“Mother’s intuition?” he asked with a small smile.
“Maybe.” I leaned into him. “Or maybe I’m just not ready for my baby to be married.”
The weeks flew by in a blur of hasty preparations.
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Before I knew it, we were booking the small hall, ordering a modest cake, and sending out invitations to a carefully curated guest list.
It all happened so fast that I barely had time to catch my breath.
On the morning of the wedding, everything seemed normal. The hall looked lovely with simple flower arrangements. Guests arrived in small groups, mingling and laughing.
Daniel, handsome in his suit, couldn’t stop smiling.
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When Lisa arrived in a sleek white dress, she was radiant. Perfect makeup, perfect hair, perfect smile. But when she hugged me, her eyes darted over my shoulder, scanning the room.
For what, I wasn’t sure.
“Beautiful ceremony,” one of Morgan’s cousins commented as we took our seats.
I nodded, trying to ignore the knot in my stomach. As Daniel and Lisa took their places before the officiant, I noticed her parents exchanging glances. Not proud, loving glances. Something more like… nervous anticipation.
The officiant began speaking about love and commitment, but I barely heard the words.
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All I could focus on was Lisa’s face and the strange tension radiating from her perfect posture.
Then, just as the officiant asked if anyone had any objections, two men in plain clothes stepped into the hall. They weren’t dressed like the other guests. They were just wearing jeans and button-downs with serious expressions.
At first, nobody understood who they were until one of them pulled out a badge and said, “Miss Lisa, could we see you for a moment?”
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At that point, Lisa’s smile vanished, replaced by something I’d never seen on her face before. Raw fear.
She stuttered something about needing to grab her ID from the coat check, and before anyone could react, she was gone. Out the back door. And so were her parents.
Confusion turned into chaos. Daniel stood there stunned, guests started murmuring, and the officiant awkwardly stepped aside. Arnold moved toward our son, placing a protective hand on his shoulder.
“What’s happening?” Daniel whispered.
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I noticed Morgan striding toward the two men with a grim satisfaction of his face. That’s when I realized something wasn’t adding up.
“Morgan?” I called out. “What did you do?”
He turned to face me, then looked at Daniel. “Son, I’m sorry it had to happen this way.”
The two “policemen” weren’t shifting uncomfortably or taking control of the situation like real officers would. One of them was actually grinning now.
“They’re not real cops, are they?” I asked, the pieces suddenly falling into place.
Morgan had the decency to look ashamed. “No. I hired them. I had to do something before it was too late.”
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“Dad, what are you talking about?” Daniel demanded, his voice cracking.
The wedding guests were gathering around us now, hungry for answers. Morgan gestured for everyone to calm down.
“Three weeks ago, I was meeting with a client at a bar downtown,” Morgan explained. “The bartender there, Joe, recognized Lisa from your phone picture. He pulled me aside. Told me she was a regular.”
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“So what?” Daniel challenged.
“So, Joe also told me about her pattern. She finds wealthy young men, pretends to fall in love, rushes them to the altar, then finds ways to drain them financially. Sometimes it’s joint accounts she empties, sometimes it’s ‘family emergencies’ that need cash.”
I felt my knees weaken. “And her parents?”
“Not her parents,” Morgan said grimly. “Joe recognized them too. They’re just two people from her circle. Part of her crew.”
Daniel’s face had gone white. “You’re lying.”
“Son, there’s more,” Morgan continued gently. “Lisa is pregnant.”
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Daniel’s eyes widened. “She… she never told me.”
“Because it’s not yours,” Morgan said. “Joe overheard her on the phone two days before she met you. She was bragging about finding a ‘rich fool’ she could trap into marriage, pretend the baby was his, and secure a comfortable life.”
“You’re lying,” Daniel repeated, but there was no conviction in his voice.
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I stepped forward, anger boiling inside me. “You knew all this, and you still gave your blessing? You let it get this far?”
“I needed proof,” Morgan said defensively. “I needed Daniel to see for himself.”
“By humiliating him on his wedding day?” I hissed.
“Better humiliated than bankrupted and raising another man’s child under false pretenses,” Morgan countered.
Arnold placed himself between them. “What matters now is Daniel.”
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We all turned to my son, who stood perfectly still, processing everything. Then he slowly removed the wedding band from his finger.
“Well,” he said quietly, “I guess that’s that.”
My heart broke for him. “Oh, honey, I’m so sorry.”
“Don’t be,” he said, his voice strengthening. “Dad’s right. Better now than later.”
The wedding guests were dispersing now, murmuring sympathetically. Someone had already started packing up the gifts. The cake sat untouched on its stand.
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Daniel looked around the half-empty hall and gave a short, humorless laugh. “Some wedding day, huh?”
I pulled him into a hug, feeling him trembling slightly. “This isn’t your fault,” I whispered.
“I should have listened to you.”
“You loved her. There’s no shame in that.”
It took time for Daniel to heal from Lisa’s betrayal. Weeks passed before he smiled easily again. Months before he stopped checking his phone, half-expecting texts from her.
But at least he still had his dignity and his future intact. And maybe he’d learned to listen to his mother’s intuition once in a while.
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